Nov 16, 2006

21 Day Challenge: Something Wrong

There is something

Something is
not right.

Anxious heartbeats expand and flee
into the night.

Though they escape,
I am pinioned.
Trapped by grey walls,
lab coats, sorrowed glances.

Hold me, please, someone?

I do not want to know.
I do
want to know.

I am scared
of the
that is

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Blogger LauraJ said...

sad but poignant
you really are a good poetrist (i know that's not a word)

12:10 PM  
Anonymous Jen said...

big hug

7:03 PM  
Blogger smileymamaT said...

Blogger ate my first comment, so I'll try to recapture my words....Pilotgirl, this poem touched a small, scared place deep in the pit of my stomach. What I mean is, you are indeed a good "poetrist". I'm glad you're doing 21 days of poetry. Sending yet another hug, because one can never have enough....
oh, and thanks for the link how-to.

10:22 PM  

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